diff --git a/content/blog/2022/04/nethack/index.md b/content/blog/2022/04/nethack/index.md
index a6a5e27..c1933f6 100644
--- a/content/blog/2022/04/nethack/index.md
+++ b/content/blog/2022/04/nethack/index.md
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ draft: false
 tags: ["Nethack", "Video Games"]
 ---
 
-A couple weeks ago, I connected to my VPS to check on something. Theres [a
+A couple weeks ago, I connected to my VPS to check on something. There's [a
 part](list-tmux-sessions) of [my dotfiles][zprofile] that runs during login
 shell initialization that prints the currently running `tmux` sessions
 associated with my account. I noticed I had a session running and attached to it
@@ -17,9 +17,9 @@ January and never finished. I finished the game, killed by a Woodland Elf, and,
 well, the damage had been done.
 
 It has been three weeks and I've had at least one game of Nethack going on my
-VPS and my laptop. There's been at least one Safari window packed with
-[NetHackWiki][nethackwiki] tabs, including a pinned one for the [Price
-Identification][priceid] page.
+VPS or my laptop nonstop since then. There's been at least one Safari window
+packed with [NetHackWiki][nethackwiki] tabs too, including a pinned one for the
+[Price Identification][priceid] page.
 
 I've gotten much better in that time. My scores have increased from the
 1000-2000 range to my best game so far in which [I scored 9401