diff --git a/content/blog/2024/jackson-and-other-holes/index.md b/content/blog/2024/jackson-and-other-holes/index.md
index 97fd7dc..f745106 100644
--- a/content/blog/2024/jackson-and-other-holes/index.md
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@@ -5,7 +5,14 @@ description: >
   My fourth annual trip with a group of high school friends took us to
   Yellowstone and Grand Teton National Parks.
 categories: Travel
-tags: [Friends, Idaho, Wyoming, Montana, National Parks]
+tags:
+  - Friends
+  - Idaho
+  - Wyoming
+  - Montana
+  - National Parks
+  - Yellowstone
+  - Grand Teton
 resources:
   - name: tetons-plane
     src: tetons-plane.jpg
@@ -160,8 +167,10 @@ resources:
         wallpaper showing leaves, mushrooms, flowers, and pigs.
 ---
 
-The fourth annual trip with a group of my high school friends took us to
-Wyoming, Idaho, and Montana, October 23–28, 2024.
+I recently returned from a trip with a group of my high school friends. This is
+the fourth annual trip we've taken as a group, and we covered a lot of ground,
+visiting three states and two national parks. Here's what we got up to.
+
 
 ## Day 1